Glass kisses
by ~restlessinkYou were doling out glass kisses
Looking for your luster to be
Reflected in someone else,
Looking for a shine that would
Burn alongside you. And
Just as Icarus flew to the sun,
You too will reach to the sky
For answers, for inspiration.
You too will be consumed by
Hapless curiosities and a love
Of things unknown. You too
Will learn the meaning of
Silence











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"And in that moment, I swear we were infinite"
Your poem caught my attention, since I have thought and written about Icarus recently and that reflection of my own thoughts caught me (poetic justice) though your individual perspective gave me something I hadn't had before. It was the phrase "glass kisses" that drew me into the poem. Seeking reflections of self, reaching for the sun ...
I agree that Narcissus adds a new element that enriches the imagery also.
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thank you!
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"And in that moment, I swear we were infinite"
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dA is for the literary arts, too.
i never noticed the Narcissus element until you mentioned it :]
Not sure XD
I never really paid attention to it
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"And in that moment, I swear we were infinite"
Especially these lines:
You were doling out glass kisses
Looking for your luster to be
Reflected in someone else
though they remind me more of Narcissus, the poem actually benefits from that other mythological allusion. Nice.
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dA is for the literary arts, too.